The subtile, "Menace in Lake Champlain", .. seems isolated to me.. like it is not connected to the title.. Is there too much space between the title and subtitle or maybe subtitle is too small? I am wondering, what do you think?
It looks best with the picture behind it, like I intended to use it. And I can't really move the subtitle up anymore, or else it would be touching the title (see the 'm' in monster). If I were to enlarge the subtitle, it would take away from the title too much to get the wanted effect.
The subtile, "Menace in Lake Champlain", .. seems isolated to me.. like it is not connected to the title.. Is there too much space between the title and subtitle or maybe subtitle is too small? I am wondering, what do you think?
ReplyDeleteIt looks best with the picture behind it, like I intended to use it.
ReplyDeleteAnd I can't really move the subtitle up anymore, or else it would be touching the title (see the 'm' in monster).
If I were to enlarge the subtitle, it would take away from the title too much to get the wanted effect.